Well executed...
A+ for effort. Nice touches everywhere (Griedo's language, backstory, etc...)
On the minus side; The pacing is a bit slow. Which is deadly considering how long the movie is.
What would really help is a control bar and scene selection. But it probably would have been better to split your script up into around 4 parts rather than one huge movie.
But all and all, an amazing flash. Good job!
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