You got the elements, now put them together
Nice design, good movement, decent graphics, and good use of music...
Now you really need to focus on the plot. I love the idea of telling your story with no words, but i wasn't intrigued enough by what i saw to care about the mystery of what was about to happen.
We need more clues, more things to catch our attention, if only to make up for the lack of dialoge and story.
Excellent first try...
I really like the general vibe of this film. Great use of 3D.
The pacing needs a lot of work. Try to cut down on the scenes where nothing is happening (riding the subway, listening to announcements that have nothing to do with the plot.) The only other thing is your dialogue, it’s not very compelling, and the word balloons that we have to click are annoying. I found myself clicking through them without even reading them, just to get to some action.
Other than that, i’d say it’s an awesome start, keep up the good work.
Exellent Work!
Very well thought out with superb execution. I was truly impressed with how well your animation synced to your audio. Keep up the good work!
Intense.
Whoa. I love the world you've created here. Disturbing and facinating.
An excellent attempt
A very well thought out, epic tale. The sound track was intriuging (Although it was annoying to have it end halfway through.) Altogether it was great, but it ran about twice as long as my interest, and the editing could have been tighter. Can't wait to see your next one.
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