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Nice!

Great track!

Cute

Well executed, a little distortion here and there, but very well done. I got a little bored after awhile. I think it would help if the "melody" changed up, you know break it into verse, chorus, break.

Anyway, very original, i liked it.

static

something-fuzzy responds:

You are right, high five (this isn't something_fuzzy, it's XpobX)

Pretty good...

Nice changes and beat. I like the verby piano sound, although in genreral i found the track somewhat repetative and disonent.

Keep it up!

static

Wow...

Nicely done. The elements come together well in this track. I particularly like the strings.

I think you're right about the beginning being weaker. The song is good enough that it's probably be worth it to go back and rework the begining.

Looking forward to yer future tracks.

static

Well, there's not much to it...

The drums sound like drum machine presets to me. Nothing really happens in the track, it's just some repetitious drums.

Also, i think Drum -n- Bass is the opposite of what this track is. It doesn't contain any of the key trademarks of DnB and it's at about half the tempo of any DnB track.

Keep experimenting. Play with some bass modules, create melodies, churn out a bunch of tracks and then upload the 15th one you make.

Schema responds:

Thanks for the advice, by the way I wish it was drup presets however using Acoustica Beatcraft means that I have to make every frickin sound. Even the drum sound is created experimenting with a single note and changing it's pitch and path.

Cool sounds, needs more variety.

I initially loved that crazy melody loop you have going, but i got kinda bored with it. You add other sounds but it think i kept waiting for it to change up or break bad or something. I like the drop out in the middle.

Love the sounds, would like to see a little more variety.

JPhoenix84 responds:

Yeah, this is a demo edit... so, the full version is probably going to be layered much more diversely. I made it too quick to realize the potential in some areas. I do feel there's more to be done on this.

Thanks for the review! :)

Wow...

I love this track. Nice melody, and a great use of diverse elements. Keep up the good work!

Wonderful remix chainsaw...

Man, i love the melody line, and the samples work great. This track has a wonderful old school moby feel to it. damn.

The drums feel a little weak to me, and a little too loud. I mean, they have this nice 8-bit quality to them, and in certain parts i love them in the context of the song, but sometimes i wanted something else.

That said, i aspire to write melodies like this.

You rock,

static

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