Just not funny.
I don't support Clinton and looked forward to a parody, but the voice acting and the incredibly slow pacing made this painful to watch.
And damn dude, credit your artists.
the track is "Frontier Psychiatry" by The Avalanches
If you read my comments, you would know that I did credit the track.
That was truely original. Great animation!
Great art. The animation is great at times but at other times looks a little cheap.
I guess you're doing translation into english? The text was kind of stilted and the story didn't have a lot of depth.
It's a great start though. I could really see you going somewhere with this.
thanks for the luck.
Nice animation, and excellent illustration. Story was so so, but better than most stuff on here. I give it extra props because it didn't have any violence.
Looking forward to your next...
That was extreemly well done. I love your sense of world. Every scene had a compelling element to it (i imagine this was the whole point for you.)
I'd love to see you make something real out of this. If you ever need writing or music, drop me a line.
I knida liked that...
It was a bit short, but i like the direction you were going with it.
Keep at it, i imagine your artwork and your stories will only get better.
P.S. - Thanks for using my track!
One word... ...preloader.
Great Art - i mean it's not Dali or anything, but it totally works. I like your character design.
The intro is great, except since you don't have a preloader it just kicked in and then stalled... and i have DSL so there's just no excuse for that. Put a damn preloader on yer flick.
Also the sound stopped syncing up half way through, which killed it for me.
I'd say you need more sound effects, and maybe some background music.
... and the writing isn't perfect, work on it a little more.
But damn it's got great potential. You've got talent, now go refine it.
That was absolutely remarkable!
This was one of the more engaging flashes i've seen on newgrounds in awhile. It's perfect.
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